DECALOG The New Series
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DECALOG
A SERIES
by
Martin Latallo
DECALOG
PRESENTATION
« THE DECALOG” is a web series of “ACTION” FILMS - short films together with film workshops and documentaries on TV and social media where famous actors, sportsmen and politicians, ACT in the sense of getting involved in true stories.
These well-known people ACT in their own roles, or as fictional characters, or in small cameos… as ordinary people who are the heroes of short stories about human rights and their violations in contemporary Europe: refugees seeking a place in “our” world, ecologists fighting against corporations, journalists researching human trafficking....
10 powerful stories about today’s world, about democracy, ecology and human rights but most of all, about people: children, sportsmen, politicians, comics, sex workers, journalist, lawyers, musicians, homosexuals, Jews and people with disabilities… we all are human beings, we all have the same rights - and the same obligations towards each other.
Each episode of the webseries will air on a TV Channel first, then be distributed through the internet and social media, and each “story” will have it’s continuation in the real world, with filmworkshops involving the heroes of our stories with the “amateurs” - local young fillmakers, film students, film masters.
DECALOG
Episodes synopsis
#1
WAR KIDS - A series of film workshops for refugee children, starting on the isle of Lesvos, as a French actress teaches Shakespare and Moliere or Bergman and Fellini to refugee children, working with the head of the Lesvos volunteers, Alysha Keller, a philosophy doctor who came for a holiday and stayed for life.
#2 SHORT STORIES OF LOVE
#3
SOS EARTH - A famous French actress starts the Climate change Ice bucket challenge, a social media campaign to save the world by pledging an ecological “good deed” and nominating three other people to do the same, Climate Change Summit and involving famous actors, politicians and sportsmen as well as film and art students.
#4
Songs4Peace - “Je t’aime, moi non plus” a famous song by Jane Birkin and Serge Gainsbourg, sung by two female singers, with a video predicting the start of a new revolution: the “Love Revolution”, and this video will be followed by many others with songs of freedom, peace and love, like “The Prayer of Francois Villon”, “Imagine”, “L’estaca/The walls”’ and many, many others that changed the history of Europe once before, and can maybe help change it again...
FOOT4ALL - An investigation into the famous sports brands that one of the most famous Polish football stars wears. Who makes his clothes? And at what price? How can we make the planet a more equitable place?
#5
FIGHT CLUBS - A young woman trains to be a fighter, she lives in a small town in Poland and is a Chechen, a Muslim and a Mixed Martial Arts champion, participates in a friendly fight to initiate a campaign supporting peace and tolerance around the world.
#7.
HOUSE OF FARTS - A comedy show with three actors wearing digital disguises as the puppets Donald Putin, Vladimir Trump and Kim Ping-Pong who each acts as judges in a game show about the trial of humanity. Of course, humanity looses and the « show » finishes with a nuclear war.
#4
#9
SHOSHANNA - An American actress, documenting her role in a future film, about a young Jewish poetess who wrote a haunting poem as a testament. The actress discovers her own Jewish roots on the Eastern border of Poland and Ukraine, while the demons of fascism and war rise again in the East…
#9
THREE SISTERS - The problem of abortion in 3 neighbouring countries: Germany, Poland, Belarus through the eyes of 3 different women who’s live intertwine around this operation: a young Pole, an Ukrainian and a Tchetchen woman.
#10
THE WAY OF JO
The director of this series, an actor and a dreamer, brings together 12 extraordinary men and women, actors, circus artists, hollywood stuntmen, and sports champions to carry a white staff, the symbol of peace, around the world - from the hills of Marathon to the highest mountain, Mount Everest, and back, in 80 days…
#11
CHILDREN OF LESVOS - A top model comes to the Isle of Lesvos to bring clothes to refugee children, as the beginning of a new fashion campaign for more equality and tolerance in today’s world.
#12
T21 - A group of children with Down syndrome practice theater together, while their parents and friends fight in a school and state system that offers very little help and understanding. The children decide to put up “Ubu King”, by the french surrealist Alfred Jarry, about a mad man ruling the country, which angers the governement...
#1
War Kids
True stories of War Children
and their first steps in our Europe
A documentary about a group of refugee children who are invited to visit a film festival in a big French city, where they meet film stars, inviting them to participate in film workshops about the stories of refugee children.
In this documentary, a group of refugee children from different countries and having found shelter in differents parts of Europe, or on its borders (from the Calais Jungle, on the outskirts of Paris, in Germany, but also from Poland or Bialorus) are invited to the a big Film Festival in a French city to launch a programme of film workshops for Children of War, under the patronage of the French film star Irène Jacob, who once starred in a film called… Goodbye Children (by Louis Malle).
This short “action film” (in the sense of action on the reality around us) will continue with the workshops, where young people from different part of the world and different backgrounds (children of war, from difficult families or ordinary children) will make films together. These short films will be inspired by their own stories, but with actors playing different parts in the films, and film students and professionals, as well as masters of cinema, supervising the realisations of these films.
These short films will together weave one story: a documentary movie about the odyssey of refugee children from around the world, and their way through Europe, with the collaboration of “local” filmmakers, but told from the perspective of the children themsemselves.
These short films will be used to support local groups helping refugee children in Europe and exercising global pressure on the governements involved in the bloodshed to stop armed conflict if possible and to spare civilians and enforce the respect of international laws by all involved in armed conflict.
#3
SOSEarth
A global campaign to save the Planet
A famous French actress throws a bucket of ice cold water over her face to send a message to the world: save the planet before it’s too late. Her gesture triggers a chain reaction of other personalities from the world of film, politics and industry participate in the “Ice bucket Climate Change Challenge” promoting behaviors, products and an ecological way of thinking.
In the launch phase, and to prove that they believe in their own words, a director, a politician and a sportsman pour a bucket of ice cold water over their own heads, and then plegdes to participate in a chosen cause to save the planet in 2019, and then each of them in turn nominates 3 other “candidates”, personalities from the world of cinema, politics and industry, or their own friends, all can participate in the “Climat Change Ice Bucket Challenge”.
The challenge will hit the Internet and reach television channels on 02.12.2018, at the opening of the Cop 24 Climate Change Summit, which will take place in Katowice, Poland. It will be the starting point for a series of short films made by film students and professionals, as well as posters made by young graphic designers and their teachers, about ecology and behaviors that are now needed to change the world, and along with a photographic competition about the most beautiful landscapes in Poland, in partnership with companies and brands that invest in sustainable development and ecology both globally and locally. The #SOSEarth global campaign will be part of a much larger movement involving “ordinary citizens”, but also personalities from the world of culture and the arts, such as actress Mélanie Laurent, whose film "Tomorrow", many times rewarded and with a great success in cinemas, is one of the sources of inspiration of this series, as well as Leonardo DiCaprio and his foundation or Arnold Schwarzenegger and both local companies and global brands promoting ecology. #SOSEarth can then become a regular series involving celebrities, politicians, scientists and brands that invest in ecology, addressing an essential topic for the continuation of life on our planet.
#4
Songs4Peace
Songs that changed the history of Europe
a rockumentary
The film begins with a song for Peace : “The Prayer of Francois Villon”, a song by the Russian bard Bulat Okudzawa, sung by several International stars in different languages, and with a video of images from the war in Syria and the refugee crisis in Europe, supporting a worldwide organisation to stop war.
After this song, several others will follow, like “Imagine” by John Lennon, or “Where have all the flowers gone” but also songs like Serge Gainsbourg’s “Je t’aime moi non plus” about the freedom of love, these songs are all still actual, and their message today is one of the need for a “Love Revolution”.
The songs of Russian bards like Bulat Okudzhava or Vladimir Vyssotski, French Chanson by Georges Brassens or Serge Gainsbourg, British punks and rockers like the Sex Pistols or the Pink Floyd, the Greek Mikis Theodorakis, the German Wolf Biermann, the Czech Karol Kryl, Polish poets like Wojciech Mlynarski or Jacek Kaczmarski, the Spanish Lluis Llach, the music that started the Portugese "Carnation revolution", or the "Singing revolution" in the Baltic countries, the songs of the Irish independence fighters, these men and women and their music changed the face of XXth century Europe simply by singing songs... and millions of people sang them too, resisting authoritarian regimes, bringing down walls, changing Europe forever.
To tell the story of the songs that changed Europe, we will invite those musicians that are still alive, and put them together with some of the greatest stars of today, whom they have influenced, and bring young musicians play their music, creating a dialogue between generations.
Videos of the new recordings will confront these “oldtimers” with young people, contemporary bands that will work on cover version the old songs, translating them into their own language, playing together, bringing together people of different generations and different countries, keeping the music alive... and giving a new meaning to the old songs in the present times.
And a final scene: a small group of musicians from all around the world perform on the streets, near a place touched by terrorism and violence, together they sing songs for Peace, Love and Freedom…
THE PRAYER OF FRANCOIS VILLON
As long as the world’s still turning,
As long as the air’s still sweet,
Lord, won’t you give to all of us
Whatever it is we need.
Give a mind to the wise one,
A shield to the enemy,
Give some gold to the happy man,
And don’t you forget about me.
As long as the world’s still turning,
Lord, if it be your will,
Give to the hungry for power
A kingdom to rule his fill.
Give some rest to the generous
Under a shady tree,
Wash the stain from the face of Cain,
And don’t you forget about me.
I know that your powers are wondrous,
I believe that your ways are wise,
The way that a fallen soldier
Believes he’s in paradise,
The way every breathing being
Believes in your gentle word,
The way, in our utter oblivion,
We keep on believing, oh Lord.
My all-wise, my all-merciful,
My sweet Lord of sea-green eyes,
As long as the world’s still turning
To its eternal surprise,
As long as it still has plenty of
Fire and destiny,
Give a little to everyone,
And don’t you forget about me
#9
Zuzanna
A haunting poem by a Jewish poet killed during the Shoah in the East
where the old demons of racism and war rise again
A famous American actress travels to present-day Ukraine to research a new role, of the poet Zuzanna Ginczanka, who came from a small town at the borders of Russia and Poland and rose to fame in pre-war Warsaw, among the famous writers of that time and was killed during the war by the Nazis, but after being denounciated by a Polish neighbour, and who left a haunting testament: the poem “Non omnis moriar”.
During the trip, the American actress also explores her own roots, her family comes from the same area, where hundreds of thousands of East European Jews were killed during the “Shoa by bullets” at the beginning of the WWII in this border area that is now Ukraine, and where the ghosts of fascism and war rise once again.
We want to use this film to initiate film workshops for children discovering the Jewish history of their own regions, where all traces have often been erased, with synagogues transformed into shops and old cemetaries overtaken by and learning tolerance and acceptance through dialogue and knowledge of other cultures.
Non omnis moriar
Non omnis moriar - my grand estate
Tablecloth meadows, invincible wardrobe castles,
Acres of bed sheets, finely woven linens,
And dresses, white dresses will survive me.
I leave no heirs.
So let your hands rummage through Jewish things,
Chominowa, woman from Lvov, brave wife of a spy,
Denouncer of others, mother of a Volksdeutscher.
May these things be useful to you and yours,
For they are near and dear to me;
no lute playing, no empty words.
I was thinking of you, when the Gestapo came,
As you thought of me, reminding me to them.
So let my friends break out holiday goblets,
Celebrate my wake and their wealth:
Kilims and tapestries, bowls, candlesticks.
Let them drink all night and at daybreak
begin their search for gemstones and gold
In sofas, mattresses, blankets and rugs.
Oh how the work will burn in their hands!
Clumps of horsehair, bunches of sea hay,
Clouds of fresh down from pillows and quilts,
Clogged with my blood, will turn their arms into wings,
And change them from birds of prey into angels.
Zuzanna Ginczanka 1907-1944
DECALOG
NOTE OF INTENT
Why?
Because the world is ruled by tyrants and by money, because we are on the brink of an ecological disaster and maybe even nuclear war, and because of this I believe in the necessity to ACT HERE and NOW, to try new solutions to global problems.
Like in the film “Spotlight”, a group of investigative journalists, photographers and filmmakers will work together on a European level, from newspapers in different countries, of different political sides, but aiming for the truth, on difficult and actual problems like the drama of the refugee children, ecological issues, human trafficking, slave labour, racist violence, governement and corporations ingerence in privacy, “dirty money” and many others, confronting the main problems of our planet and our time - and looking for the solutions to save our world.
One of these solutions are “Action” Films: workshops with Amateurs, Students and Professionals in collaboration with local organisations and big groups, involving famous actors and filmstars, but also popstars and athletes, journalists and filmmakers, activists and ordinary citizens… we all need to do even a small step for our planet and other human beings, by making a film, singing songs together, playing a friendly game…
This is why I want to propose this new way of making real “Action” films, of changing the world by changing it’s images first, by shining a spotlight on things which happen here and now, just on the borders of our lives, in the very same world we all live in and by looking at them - try to change our world for the better.To make films to bring more Hope, Love and Understanding.
DECALOG
a TV series
Written by Marcin Latałło
”Filmmakers cannot change the world, but we can change the images of the world.”
Wim Wenders
PRESENTATION
« DECALOG is a series consisting of 10 episodes, based on true stories, in which well-known actors play ordinary people who fight against of human rights violations in contemporary Europe: refugees seeking a place for themselves, ecologists fighting against deforastation, journalists researching human trafficking.... 10 stories about nowadays world.
I believe that our present times need a change of perspective, a new approach to reality, a different view on events which touch us all. 30 years after the death of my friend and mentor, Krzysztof Kieślowski, I wish to continue his ideas and promote a vision of cinema close to the viewer. We have cameras, computers and internet, we can work wherever help is needed and raise public awareness. Thanks to audiovisual tools and social media we can work across borders overcoming differences and divisions, using the medium of film in order to connect local networks with global actions.
The series and the DECALOG webpage will help raise public awareness of current problems through the films, while at the same time giving people the tools to understand, engage and undertake action in our ever more complicated world.
DECALOG
episodes synopsis
#1
WAR KIDS
Isam and Fahima are children of the Syrian exodus. The boy comes from a Syrian Catholic family, the girl from a Lybian Muslim, but since they lost everything during their crossing of the Mediterrenean, they call each other “brother” and “sister”. They arrive on a beach of Lesbos in Greece, when their boat, with dozens of other migrants, capsizes. A Polish volounteer, Maciek, saves the boy from drowning. The children are placed in a camp, awaiting the recognition of their refugees status. Maciek conducts a theatre workshop based on Homer’s Odyssey, and gets to know the children and their stories: how they lost everything, how they got to where they are now, the deep wounds they carry indside. Maciek befriends a French UN worker, Sara, and together, they try to help the children. Isam carries with him a cell phone that his parents gave to him before they lost each other at the border crossing, and Sara discovers a number in Sweden, a makes the call: Isam has an uncle in the city of Umeo, at the very north of the country. His status can be processed, and the boy can be sent to his uncle - but Fahima cannot go with him, and because of the new policies of the EU, she is sent away to Turkey, to a refugee camp there. Isam is reunited with his uncle in a small city near the Polar circle ; Fahima works in a sweat shop in Turkey, manufacturing clothes for big western corporations; Maciej returns to his acting in Poland, but cannot forget about the children ; Sara comes back from her mission changed, and then she receives a letter from Isam - it’s a letter to his parents, he doesn’t know where they are and asks Sara to forward it to them, if she can find them…
In Europe there are about 100,000 children and adolescents fleeing war and dictatorship; about 10% of them disappear without leaving a trace. These are orphaned kids, victims of war and dictatorship, Syrians, Afghans or Chechens. They reach Europe through the Greek islands, the Balkans, Italy or are stopped at the Polish and Belorussian border. Children are isolated in refugee camps at Europe’s borders, sent often to unprepared orphanages. Many of them become victims of human trafficking. What is the fate of these children in our Europe and on our borders, how can we help them?
#2
SHORT STORIES OF LOVE
A carousel of love beginning in the contemporary Warsaw and going further through Europe in the world of fashion. Magda, director of the Polish branch of an international fashion magazine, falls in love with a young, handsome model, who is black. But when the young man is beaten up in a racist attack, Magda decides to change her life and to engage her magazine into the “Love Revolution”... The characters meet, make love and then get back to their lives… There’s Magda and here lover, there’s a French fashion blogger, a performance artist from Syria who is also refugee, a transsexual fashion designer and a Chinese photographer… The episode ends with all of these characters meeting at a fashion show for fair trade featuring, where top models, but also people with disabilities, plus size women and third age models walk the catwalk.
In this episode, famous fashion designers, established photographers and international fashion magazines cooperate in order to raise public awareness about fairfashion, the fight for gender equality and environmental protection. asking the question if fashion can become the mirror of our times and influence the world in a positive way, changing our image of and our approach to the textile industry and environmental protection? Is the “Love Revolution” possible?
#3
SOS PLANET
Krzysztof, a young Polish movie director comes to Puszcza Białowieska (Białowieża Forest) in order to shoot a science-fiction movie about a huntress from the future, who arrives to hunt a legendary white bison, long-lost in her times. The main role is to be played by an international movie star, and the script has been written by the director’s late father. But Krzysztof and his crew pop up in the very middle of a conflict between environmental activists and timber industry companies, which cooperate with the government on the logging of the old forest, at the same time blocking the shooting of the movie. The filmmakers will have to choose whose side to take…
The Białowieża Forest is the last primeval forest in Europe. It has been designated as UNESCO World Heritage Site. It is also the oldest forest – why did others get extinct everywhere else? What can we do in order to save the last stronghold and to protect our natural environment? The film will take us into the protected area, although threatened by the current government, and into other regions in Europe where primeval forests have already disappeared. Our film will also show how deforestation is directly responsable for more than 20% of global warming.
#4
SONGS4PEACE
A “rockumentary” film. Vera, a young singer, wants to make a record with songs that changed Europe, becoming a tool in the fight with dictators and repressive governments. She travels through Europe, following the traces of Russian bards such as Bulat Okudzhava or Vladimir Vysotsky, French singers such as Georges Brassens or Léo Ferré, Spanish oppositionists like Lluis Llach, or Mikis Teodorakis from Greece who has won an Oscar for his music to the “Zorba the Greek” movie, the Czech Karel Kryl expelled in 1968 or Wolfgang Biermann, Nina Hagen’s stepfather, chased away from DDR, English punk-rockers like Sex Pistols or the Irish from U2…
The songs tell the story of social and political transformations on our continent. The music being an immaterial value allows to ask questions about relationships between economy and utopia, confronting the beliefs of artists, economists and philosophers regarding huge inequalities in our world.
#5
FIGHT CLUBS
Roxanna, nicknamed “Roxy”, trains in a Mixed Martial Arts club in the city of Łódź, quickly becoming the new star in this brutal discipline, forbidden in many European countries. Surrounded by machos, homophobes and racists, she hides a secret: she’s gay. Roxy achieves ever greater success, preparing for a fight under the patronage of Mahmed Khalidov, presently the champion of Poland and the idol of masses, who has come to this country as a Muslim refugee from Chechnya. Before the fight, Roxy, blackmailed by a former lover, also a member of his club, has to face the most important decision in her life: should she do her “coming out” or not?
How to oppose violence and racism? This episode will explore the world of the extreme right, revealing relationships between right-wing groups, hooligans, organized crime and the Russian secret services…
#6
LOVECRAFT
Charlotte, nicknamed “Charlie”, a young IT programmer, creates a virtual reality online game: “LOVECRAFT”, inspired by her favorite horror writer. The game becomes an international hit, played by millions of people worldwide… But then Charlie discovers that her game has been hijacked by a powerful and mysterious hacker, or a group of hackers, who may be working for the secret services of a certain governement… They implanted a virus into the pirated versions of them game, that allows them to steal data and control millions of computers worldwide...
Where does the right to free expression begin and where does it end? What are its limits in the era of the Internet? What role can we adopt in the times of technological revolution, what dangers/threats exist for our private life? How we can protect ourselves and how to use technology so it can serve us better? This episode uncovers the darkweb, the dark side of internet, where hackers work for intelligence services of foreign powers, armies of trolls destroy political enemies and information constitutes a currency in the international cyberwar. The episode combines live-action with computer animation.
#6
Right to a fair trial
J’ACCUSE
6 characters in the city of Cracow, 3 days before the Pope’s visit on the occasion of the World Youth Days. Every one of the protagonist is in some way connected to the Smolensk tragedy, the plane catastrophy where the Polish President Lech Kaczynski and almost hundert members of the governement where killed when landing in Russia.
There is Marine, a French journalist on a lookout for a scandal; father Karol, who has to improvise as an amateur detective; Samir, a young Arab tourist; Daniel, guiding a group of Jewish scouts; Ola, a film director from the government’s television, who lost her parents in the disaster; and sister Basia, a nun, who will have to ride her old motorbike again… but the adventures of our heroes, through a fatal chain of circumstances, bring the world on the brink of World War III. The world’s leaders: Trump, Putin, Xi Pingpong, and the Pope, also appear as spitting-image like puppets, mixing real-life footage with animatronics.
This episode will be a black comedy in the vein of Doctor Strangelove, exposing the strange relations between the greatest catastrophe in recent Polish history and it’s links to the global crisis of democracy, and how the current right-wing Catholic government, led by Jaroslaw Kaczynski, whose twin brother, Lech Kaczynski, died in the plane crash, uses this for his propaganda. A story so incredible that no screenwriter could have invented it.
#9
ZUZANNA
Mikolaj, a french-polish writer with Jewish roots, comes to Poland to write a book about an almost forgotten historical character: Zuzanna Ginczanka, who was also a friend of Mikolaj’s grandmother, now 100 years old. The story of Zuzanna begins in 1935, she is 18, born in Rowne (eastern borderland of Poland) and becomes a star in Warsaw’s literary world. She befriends the great writers of her time, Witold Gombrowicz, Bruno Schulz and Julian Tuwim… But then the war erupts and Zuzanna flees to the east, to Lvov. The city is first occupied by the Soviets, and then by the Nazis, Zuzanna has to go into hiding, finally she is denounced by a neighbour and killed by the Gestapo. Only very few of her poems remain now, and Mikołaj discovers how her last poem, her testament, was used as a piece of evidence in a trial in post-war stalinist Poland. But this in turn brings out incomfortable truths for certain members of the current right-wing governement, and Mikolaj finds himself the victim of a hate campaign that tries to smear his private live and his own family history...
Polish Jews, Jews from Poland: who are they today? This episode adresses the question of the identity, from centuries of history to World War II, the post-war years, the antisemitic campaign of 1968 organised by the communist governement, and the present times…
3 SISTERS
Three women – Wera, a Pole who lives in Germany; Nadia, an Ukrainian who lives in Poland and Luba, Belorussian, who dreams about leaving her country – are about to undergo abortion. Each one of them has her own story and her own reasons. The conditions of performing the procedures in each country differ from each other completely…
Everywhere in Europe and all over the world women are protesting. What is the present place and role of women, from bikinis to burkhas, in the times of post-feminism, gender equality but also religious fundamentalism, which restricts women rights? How do women live in Poland, from the poorest ones to the most affluent? How can we redefine the role of women in our society?
#12
UBU21
Zofia, a young girl with Down syndrome, falls in love with Tomek, a young non-disabled actor, who belongs to a theatre ensemble consisting of disabled and non-disabled people, who are preparing a performance based on “Ubu King” by Alfred Jarry. Zofia joins them, but the play can’t start because the troupe awaits the arrival of a French woman director, an international star, who is supposed to direct the play but was stopped at the border because the star has made comments about the current situation in Poland and has become a persona non grata in the country... At the same time, the theatre becomes the target of attacks by right-wing extremists manipulated by the government, for whom this theatre is a cumbersome place…
This episode looks at children with disabilities: Autism, Down syndrome, handicapped children... What is their (and their parents and families) every day fight at home, in school, in hospitals? Who is helping them, what are their rights and obligations?
Director’s note
“I made films to talk to people. My objective was to tell stories that engage people because they find them familiar.”
Krzysztof Kieśłowski
My friend and mentor, Krzysztof Kieślowski, withdrew from making documentaries because he felt that he was crossing a certain barrier, by using the image of his protagonists and their stories for his own purposes. More than twenty years after his death, I believe that I have managed to find the answer to a filmmaker’s dilemma and it is the “12 Borders” series. I wish to combine engaged feature films with the objectivity of a documentary.
These true stories touch upon the most important problems of our times: war children, destruction of the natural environment, human trafficking, contemporary slavery… The participation of recognisable actors will help to raise awareness among the public of human rights issues and will help to humanize the terrifying statistics. When we talk about important problems such as climate change, world peace, refugees, the issue of Europe, information control, we have to be aware that all these matters are connected on the global level.
This series is also the continuation of a moral and philosophical reflexion adressed by Krzysztof Kieślowski in his “Decalog” or the “Three colours”, but rooted in our present times – in an era in which totalitarian leaders dominate a world deeply immersed in a humanitarian, environmental and economical crisis.
Martin Latallo, Paris 2025
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